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I think this is way better than the first version! The face and the hair looks better that way. I don't know if you wanted that, but the hair looks a bit like cat ears and this is disturbing me a little. Maybe if it was a bit rounder it would bring less attention to this.

The colors are beautiful and the shading are very well done. One thing on the dress, the belly part has too much folds. She looks like she is way too skeletal. I think this part should be more flat so we can see she has a belly.

You are on the right way! Keep it up!
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You have not seen the first version of this picture. In fact, this is the only version of it so far (unless you are talking about something else).

I did noticed the cat ears portion of her original character design. Too bad I cannot remove it because it is one of the her most distinguishing features of her, let alone being representative of her uncontrollable obsession with cats as seen in the series.

You are the first one to point out folds on the belly portion of the dress. I'll take a look at it and ask people around dA if they think the same thing.

Thanks for the fair critique.

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Oh I might have mistaken this drawing for another one that was a lot like this one then.
If the cat ears are part of the design, then that's alright!

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